I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Friday, 27 July 2012

Haunted Mountain

"Mum are we there yet ?" I asked "No not yet sweety"replied mum, "How much longer until we're there?" I asked "Just one more second... and here we are on Haunted Mountain wonder why they
call it that?"said mum."Finally!" I shouted," Don't shout like that young lady"said mum sternly "Sorry" I said and then "Ahhhh!"I screamed and so did mum.We saw something that was white, but it
wasn't the snow it was something, else you would probably ask me what makes you think that it
wasn't snow well it was lying down in the snow, and it just stood up in front of me and my mum,oh
wait a second? It's just a white wooden yeti that says Welcome on the front of his chest,
Wait a second a tree is staring right at me.

If you want to read more of the Haunted Mountain
 your gonna have wait for a little while bye.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Michelle
    This is a great start to a story. I want to read more. How are you going to develop your story more in the future?



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