I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Friday, 8 March 2013


Hi my names Whisper I know weird name right, but it's my name my assassin name.Here's my story I'm an orphan and a secret organisation adopted me and are training me to be a killer assassin to do their dirty work for them, and that's 1 of the reasons why I'm in this position.

I was walking down the hall when a stupid friend of mine jumped out at me and told me to run, confused at first I suddenly realised she did something that nobody should ever do, she stole the codes to the organisations bank where millions of dollars are stored so we ran we ran outside, and I took a quick moment to scan the area for other assassins but all I could see was the sunlight shimmering on the snow.

Years later after my really stupid friend and I stole the organisations money we started our own organisation but it wasn't secret nor did we treat the recruits like dogs we treated them much better, but we do make them train in the snow on graduation day.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Michelle
    Thanks for your story. Again you need to go back and edit your work checking that the details you are writing add to your story.



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